http://borgsdemons.com/blog/2007/05/04/the-trip/ Live Hard . . . Die Free! Fri, 04 Jul 2008 04:19:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.1 http://borgsdemons.com/blog/2007/05/04/the-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-16 John Merryweather Cooper Sat, 05 May 2007 20:46:04 +0000 http://borgsdemons.com/blog/2007/05/04/the-trip/#comment-16 You had a very penetrating insight that Kevin is darker than he appears. That part of the story has not been developed. The focus is on Kevin and the Road. Neither Blair nor Barbara are very important. You had a very penetrating insight that Kevin is darker than he appears. That part of the story has not been developed. The focus is on Kevin and the Road. Neither Blair nor Barbara are very important.

]]> http://borgsdemons.com/blog/2007/05/04/the-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-13 burbachcooper Sat, 05 May 2007 20:36:54 +0000 http://borgsdemons.com/blog/2007/05/04/the-trip/#comment-13 A gripping story - very well written. I imagine lots of associate attorney's could identify. My only critique is the conclusion - it sort of dropped me without any satisfaction. Barbara comes off as a caricature rather than a developed character. Kevin must have more dark in him than is portrayed. Overall though, I really liked it and I really love you! A gripping story – very well written. I imagine lots of associate attorney’s could identify. My only critique is the conclusion – it sort of dropped me without any satisfaction. Barbara comes off as a caricature rather than a developed character. Kevin must have more dark in him than is portrayed. Overall though, I really liked it and I really love you!

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